ext_27012 ([identity profile] swift-tales.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bedlamsbard 2008-07-19 11:40 am (UTC)

This was brilliance.

I simply love how you put it in Peter's POV but still managed to enter enough of all the others to form a general image of what they might be thinking and feeling. It's supperb. Caspian acting a bit like a confused child, or a lot maybe. But yeah, he's a bit overwhelmed by everything I think.
And it was just oh so ver lovely, I loved this bit, I so did. ^^

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