westingturtle ([identity profile] westingturtle.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bedlamsbard 2009-03-30 05:27 pm (UTC)

Okay, somehow you need to fit that last little bit of information into the narrative, because it adds a whole new bit of funny as well as keeping Susan manipulative and no one is going to realize that while reading.

Still, it's one thing for her to be scary and presumptive of godhood, it's another for her to be lying while she's at it.

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