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bedlamsbard ([personal profile] bedlamsbard) wrote2009-03-22 11:52 am
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two scenes from the Casverse: Peter/girl!Caspian, Susan/girl!Caspian, Peter/other

There are two scenes from the Casverse (I gave up on finding a name and we shall just go with Cas! Which is a nickname. For something we don't know. [livejournal.com profile] deepad's suggestion) that I have actually written, and they are the most awkward scenes ever.



"I promised you a real wedding and a real bed," Peter says, shutting the door behind him. Cas can still hear the raucous sound of the party going on down below, faint with distance. "By Telmarine standards," he adds, watching her with dark eyes.

"Thank you," she says, but her gaze keeps flicking nervously to the bed and then away.

Peter steps toward her and cups her cheek in one hand. He kisses her slow and absolutely certain, tongue brushing velvet-rough against hers. Cas clutches convulsively at the front of his shirt, barely aware of Peter steering her backwards to the bed. When the backs of her knees hit the edge of it, she freezes.

"It's all right," Peter says, quiet and soothing. He strokes a hand through her hair, pulling the pins out. They clatter to the floor, almost too loud for Cas to stand.

He pulls back from her frowning a little. "Husband," she says, testing the word on her tongue. She's been waiting for this day her whole life, and yet --

"Wife," Peter returns. He kisses her again, reaching around for the buttons on the back of her dress. Cas lets him, shiveirng a little as his thumb brushes down her bare skin. Peter kisses the side of her neck as he pushes her dress down over her shoulders.



And this bit, which is later -- there's some intimation of location, if only because Peter and Susan and Cas and some of the army are tramping around from noble to noble trying to rally support to Cas, so they're not set up in one place.



Peter comes back to her with the bitter taste of someone else's sweat drying on his skin, slipping silently into their be without an apology or an explanation. Cas never says anything, just offers her body up to him without a word. He usually does nothing, just smiles a little, a pale shadow in the darkness of whatever room they're in this week, and kisses her before wrapping an arm around her waist and going to sleep. Cas lies awake, listening to her husband breathe, and smells sweat and sex beneath the lighter floral scent of soap.

Aunt Prunaprismia used to tell her this was going to happen. It's different for men, she'd said. They take their pleasures where they will and we can do nothing. You may be glad of that someday.

She's not sure whether she's glad of it or not. Peter touches her from time to time, light and absolutely certain, and it's good, it's fabulous. Cas arches up into his hands and mouth, gasping and clutching at his shoulders, his back, his hair, hoping that if she holds on long enough and hard enough he won't feel compelled to spend his nights in someone else's bed -- although at least he always comes back to hers.

Susan's kisses are warm and generous, lingering longer than a sister's should. Her hands are smoothly callused, a little rough against Cas's skin, and her lips are chapped when she brushes them across Cas's breasts. She spends hours just kissing Cas, everywhere except her lips and the space between her legs, until Cas is tight and aching and comes just from Susan's breath on her clit. She leaves Cas's bed in the space before Peter comes in, kissing Cas goodbye before she dresses and goes out the bedroom door.

Once she left late, or Peter came back early, and they met in the outer room. Cas remembers sitting up in bed and clutching the sheets to her bare breasts, thinking, But he knows, he knows, because the sheets always smell like her and Susan and because sometimes, when they're dressing in the morning, Peter's eyes skate over the love bites Susan has left. But the only thing that had happened was that Peter had, "Su," and Susan had said, "Peter," and there had been a long, mostly silent moment before the outer door had opened and closed again. Peter hadn't said anything when he'd come in, just kissed the spot on her neck where Susan had sucked a red mark before undressing and climbing into bed.

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[personal profile] deepad 2009-03-22 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh poor Cas! Poor woobie! Someone needs to love her for herself, not just her political bounty. I hope Susan helps instil some self-worth in her.

Now that Cas is married to the High King, does that put her higher than the other kings and queens? It would be kind of cool to see Peter being obliviously dismissive of her and deferring to Su and Lucy and Ed because in his head they are the real kings and queens, and then to have Su quietly turn around and defer to Cas, and convince her that its ok to actually reign, and it is her land now...
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-22 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Cas, indeed. I couldn't write this if only because I just feel so bad for her.

It depends on whose standards you're going by. Her official title actually is Queen, and the Telmarines look upon her as such. To the Narnians, however, she's not a queen, just Peter's wife, and the Pevensies are the legitimate rulers. (I think at this point in time Edmund and Lucy are out in the wilds of Narnia rallying the Narnians, while Peter, Cas, and Susan are trying to gain Telmarine support. Which is not really the sort of thing Peter's good at it, but he's kind of forced into the position because he's married to Cas and thus needs to be a figurehead.) Telmarine Narnia has no tradition of ruling queens, though.
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[personal profile] deepad 2009-03-23 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
You know, I hate to mention this, but you are, sort of, writing it. :)

Hahaha. I am amused by the idea of a faction saying that since Cas is legitimate queen, then Peter, by marrying her, became Prince Consort. Which would make Susan High Queen over all Kings and Queens. ::snerk::
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
I most certainly am not!

That's only a Telmarine faction -- none of the Narnian factions would ever disregard the High King. (Although some are probably convinced that he's gone mad, to even contemplate allying with the Telmarines.)
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[personal profile] deepad 2009-03-23 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
Glos would totally be that faction! He would be all extra courtly and "Prince Consort" Peter every time he saw him, and bow to Cas first, and Peter would "Queen Susan... my wife Cas, and... oh yes, My Lord whatevercakes" back, and Cas would just be miserable about it, and secretly happy that Glos seemed to be on her side, but she didn't want to make Peter be Prince Consort, and Susan would just roll her eyes, and very nicely refrain from pointing out that Glos and Peter were probably shagging each other six ways from Sunday.
Yes?
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm, maybe. I think Glozelle would acknowledge Peter as king of the Narnians in his own right, and therefore he would be technically a king (king consort by Telmarine standards, to be correct). And since a major point of the alliance is to join the Narnians and the Telmarines together, which the Telmarines probably (reluctantly) understand, they'd go ahead and acknowledge Peter as a king. Whether or not he actually has any authority among Telmarine Narnia is probably the real question of debate, especially since the matter's confused more by the fact that the Telmarines have no tradition of ruling queens.

[identity profile] caramelsilver.livejournal.com 2009-03-22 10:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh poor naive Cas. Life is not easy is it? Especially when you have to learn how to understand the Pevensies. Does she think that Peter is sleeping with women?

And I second the question of her rank. Since technically Su, Lu and Ed wouldn't have any authority what so ever, right?
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-22 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't think she's ever considered the possibility that Peter would be sleeping with someone other than women. I'm not actually sure who Peter is sleeping with -- I'm reasonably certain he's not sleeping his way through the Telmarine nobility in order to gain supporters, but hey, who knows -- but I don't think Cas wants to think about the subject either.

Cas is Queen Cas of Telmarine Narnia BUT she has no legitimate ranking position in Old Narnian Narnia, where she's just looked at as Peter's wife. By Narnian standards, the Pevensies are the only monarchs there are, but by Telmarine standards, Peter gains his legitimacy from the fact he's married Cas. It's all very confusing. And to add to that, Telmar has no tradition of ruling queens, so the Telmarines aren't really considering her as anything other than a figurehead, with Peter and Susan the real power, despite the fact they're so young. (Edmund and Lucy are off rallying the Narnians.)

[identity profile] caramelsilver.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that makes sense. I figured she would just be seen as 'the wife'. One of my favorite Narnian authors on ffnet actually has Edmund pass a law (to ward off marysues...) that states that anyone who marries them would never be given the title of queen (or king), but only consort of... But what happens to Miraz in this equation? Did he just willingly give over his kingship to Peter because he married Cas? (*Has a feeling she just missed the entire point...*)
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
This fic is all politics. Peter, Susan, and Cas are wandering around Telmarine Narnia trying to win the support of the Telmarine nobles; they're trying to get enough support that the war will be quick and more or less bloodless, but Miraz has the advantage of sitting in the castle and actually having a lot of the lords there and under his thumb. (There are far more lords than in canon because all the ones that Miraz either had killed, hauled off as crazy, banished, or just plain disappeared are still around, since Cas isn't much of a threat to his throne -- the Seven Great Lords of Narnia, etc.)

Does that make sense, or am I explaning it badly?

(This is in contrast to Water, where Caspian's never crowned king of Narnia, since Peta just bulldozes over all Telmarine authority. Caspian in Water is just plain Prince-Consort.)

[identity profile] caramelsilver.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
But what do they need support for if Cas is already queen and Peter is king? Is Miraz battling them after this, or did the crowing happen after Miraz is beaten? I guess this is where my confusion lies.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
Cas had herself declared queen, and she's got the support of a number of noted Telmarine lords to back it up. Basically, at this point (not counting the Pevensies) there are two royals in the country both competing for the same throne: Miraz and Cas. Civil war.

(I know there are actual historical examples I can refer to, but I can't think of any.)

[identity profile] caramelsilver.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 12:31 am (UTC)(link)
Ah! Okay, now I get it. Kinda cool, really.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
Too many politics for my taste. *twitches* I really do prefer just writing straight hack and bash warfare. (Um. Dust aside.)
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[personal profile] alexseanchai 2009-03-23 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
Sounds very Wars of the Roses to me. 'Course all I know about the Wars of the Roses comes from Shakespeare and I have read neither Shakespeare's histories nor Shakespeare's Kings recently enough to remember wtf happened during the Wars of the Roses. I know there were the Yorks and the Lancasters, and one family was claiming the throne on the basis of the most direct descent from, um, the Black Prince, I think? Anyway, the other family was claiming the throne on the basis of the most direct strictly-patrilineal descent from the same individual.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
I also know nothing about the War of the Roses. *sheepish* Er, except for the civil war over the throne part.
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[personal profile] alexseanchai 2009-03-23 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Probably the only relevant bit is that Cas's claim to the throne is she's a direct descendant of the previous king and Miraz is only the previous king's brother, Miraz's claim to the throne is he's a close male relative of the previous king and Cas is only a female, and if we throw in a few more generations and confuse matters a bit, that's the Yorks and the Lancasters.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
Civil war, you know how it is. *grins*
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[personal profile] aella_irene 2009-03-23 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
The Wars of the Roses were between the descendents of Henry IV, who was the son of John of Gaunt, the third son of Edward III, and the descendants of Edmund of Langley, (fourth son), and Lionel of Antwerp, (second son) because Richard of Conisburgh married his first-cousin-twice-removed, Anne Mortimer, who was from a more senior descent, but through the female line. And Henry VI had the army and was arguing it, I believe, based on birth and right of conquest.

The Tudors were descended from one of John of Gaunt's legitimised bastards, and a previous Queen who had married her wardrobe master, and so had no claim at all, but didn't let that stop them. (The King of Portugal had a better claim. Actually, so did most of the nobility of England.)

(EDIT: Despite the female-line thing, Anne's brother had been heir-presumptive to Richard II, who Henry deposed.)

(Son of EDIT: And none of this would have mattered had Henry V died when Henry VI was an adult, but he died when he was three months old, and Henry VI was not up to the job. He thought his son was fathered by the Holy Spirit.)
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
So, something nice and simple, then.

[identity profile] starsimpulse.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
Does this take place in the same time frame (more or less) as Warverse and Petaverse? That makes Peter what 16? He's awfully young to be getting married, even if he really is in his thirties. And it happened so quick; I mean they hardly know eachother! I know it's all politics but, still.

This verse is just depressing. Like, I always thought that if any of the Pevensies ever got married, even if they were marrying because they wanted to, because they loved them or whatever, and not marrying for political reasons, (not that I'm saying Peter doesn't love Cas, actually scratch that, I HAVE NO IDEA) the relationship would be really open and the Pevensies would still sleep with eachother, and wouldn't really be an issue, but Cas is just so naive, an so proper, and it makes me sad that Peter is sleeping his way through the Telmarine Lords or whatever the heck he's doing. I don't think it would bother me if he was sleeping with one of his siblings, (it would make me irrationally happy if he was sneaking off shagging Edmund, except for wait, he's off in the forest, isn't he?) so I think what I'm really doing here is morning the lack of Pevencest. This verse is suspiciously lacking in Pevencest (Are Edmund and Susan still fucking? I vote YES.). It's really wierd, because I always thought that Peter/Susan was my least favorite Pevencest pairing but, like, I miss them? The obvious answer here is for them to have a threesome. It would solve EVERYTHING.

GUH. My thoughts are so scattered. I'm not even sure this comment makes sense. *sigh*
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
Pretty much, yes. And sixteen isn't too young to be married, not by standards other than the twentieth century. Actually, come to think of it, Cas probably should have been married by now -- Miraz might have been holding out on betrothing her just in case her husband had ideas about claiming the throne.

It's always politics with the Pevensies and marriage -- Peta and Caspian may be the only exception, and that was still largely political; she probably wouldn't have married period without the Telmarine political complications to consider. And Cas, well, she doesn't know what the hell is going on -- she's pretty much been raised to the fact that the men will sleep around and it doesn't matter, and that the women live by different standards.

And, hell, I have no idea who Peter's sleeping with. (Susan, maybe; someone else, probably.)

Threesome: COMING. *grins*

[identity profile] lazaefair.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
hoping that if she holds on long enough and hard enough he won't feel compelled to spend his nights in someone else's bed -- although at least he always comes back to hers.

Fuck, this hits way too close to home. *scowls at Peter* I know you're developing your Peter in sort of the way he would naturally develop in this situation, but it's almost too disturbing to start thinking of him in the same way as certain real-life cheating bastards in my life. I wish I didn't know how Cas felt all too intimately.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, God, now I feel terrible.

[identity profile] lazaefair.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, of course it's not your fault...I was just a bit shaken at how powerfully that line struck me because of my RL experiences, and realized that all my reading of any fiction or nonfiction would be affected in the future. Your Peter, from what I've read of him so far (I recently went through everything on your fic roundup in Warsverse), isn't actually particularly out of character here, but because of my life experiences, I'm more inclined now to point at him and say, "heartless cheating bastard" than say "he's being fair to himself and Cas's needs."
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really sorry that this hit you so hard, and that you had to go through that.

Peter is kind of being a heartless bastard, though -- I don't think he connects particularly well with people. Ever.

[identity profile] lazaefair.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Fair enough. I am glad that you gave Cas a consolation prize in the form of Susan, though.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2009-03-23 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I have the feeling that Susan is planning to give her brother a stern talking to as soon as she figures out how much this is wearing on Cas.