Oh, um...there isn't going to be more. This was posted because I don't mean to finish Bloody Sunday and someone wanted to know how it was meant to end -- there are scenes I want to write, but the text changed so radically from the outline that I had (and still have) no idea how to get from Chapter Seven to the end, and there's so much new canon that it doesn't make sense anymore.
One tidbit. When you bust Mac's rank, he should go from a Det First Grade to Det Third Grade. Third is lowest :)
In the Bardverse Mac is a Lieutenant, since that was how he was originally billed in that one Miami/NY ep (not the most recent pair, the first one). So he would be busted down to Det. First Grade, because he'd still be in control of the Crime Lab. I think.
The M/S relationship gets worse. Considerably. It takes parallel universes to make it all healthy again. *nods* (Yet, um, another reason I haven't written lately. Canon? What canon?)
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Date: 2006-11-12 06:08 am (UTC)One tidbit. When you bust Mac's rank, he should go from a Det First Grade to Det Third Grade. Third is lowest :)
In the Bardverse Mac is a Lieutenant, since that was how he was originally billed in that one Miami/NY ep (not the most recent pair, the first one). So he would be busted down to Det. First Grade, because he'd still be in control of the Crime Lab. I think.
The M/S relationship gets worse. Considerably. It takes parallel universes to make it all healthy again. *nods* (Yet, um, another reason I haven't written lately. Canon? What canon?)