I won't pretend to know what you're talking about in full, cause I have a feeling you have all of this stuff in your head and you're just getting it out and I don't know the entire plot, but this looks totally perfect. The balance of characters appearing, plot arcs, and the regular cases is really nice, because it keeps the entire arc moving, but not so quickly that an audience would a) predict what's happening in full, and b) get bored waiting. Which, of course, are both things that canon fails to do.
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Date: 2007-04-06 04:10 am (UTC)I won't pretend to know what you're talking about in full, cause I have a feeling you have all of this stuff in your head and you're just getting it out and I don't know the entire plot, but this looks totally perfect. The balance of characters appearing, plot arcs, and the regular cases is really nice, because it keeps the entire arc moving, but not so quickly that an audience would a) predict what's happening in full, and b) get bored waiting. Which, of course, are both things that canon fails to do.