Yes, so well, the interlude that was supposed to be between chapters five and six? Will probably be (the edited version, that is) between chapters six and seven, since the Mac/Danny antagonization scene isn't coming till six. Of course, I have to figure out if I can actually write Mac freaking out, and if I can, if I should write the scene where Curly Sassone and Phil DaCosta confront Mac, Stella, and Aiden.
I can understand Danny, I can write him, I can more or less get inside his head. I can write Flack, but only from somebody else's point of view. I don't have much of a hold on the others at all. Like the hold I have on Mac? I'm making it all up. Stella and Aiden I should be able to relate to, because I mean, closest like in real life. Strong-willed females with not that many problems. Stella seems like the best bet. So if I can write Danny, and I can write Stella, I should be able to do most of Snafu from their points of view, and hopefully I'll be able to pin Mac, Flack, and Aiden down. Aiden should be easiest.
And do I have a clue what's going on in Snafu right now? Not a clue. Not at all.
( They were still finding sprays of blood in the weirdest places. )
I can understand Danny, I can write him, I can more or less get inside his head. I can write Flack, but only from somebody else's point of view. I don't have much of a hold on the others at all. Like the hold I have on Mac? I'm making it all up. Stella and Aiden I should be able to relate to, because I mean, closest like in real life. Strong-willed females with not that many problems. Stella seems like the best bet. So if I can write Danny, and I can write Stella, I should be able to do most of Snafu from their points of view, and hopefully I'll be able to pin Mac, Flack, and Aiden down. Aiden should be easiest.
And do I have a clue what's going on in Snafu right now? Not a clue. Not at all.
( They were still finding sprays of blood in the weirdest places. )