New York Minute 19
Jun. 4th, 2005 06:27 pm*falls over* This chapter killed me. Killed me very dead. I wrote three different versions of it, hated them all, and finally went with the one I hated the least. Has more of the Mafia than the NYPD in it, though. But hurrah! Ace! And foreshadowing.
( a bemused expression on the sharp planes of his face )
( a bemused expression on the sharp planes of his face )