Omerta 10

I hate this chapter. No, seriously, I hate it, and if I had time, I'd rewrite it again so that it makes more sense. I don't have time, though (orch camp. 8:30 to 8:00 Monday till Friday, excepting this two and a half hour break I got right now). My writing style has totally gone to hell in a handbasket, and I blame it either on the fact that this chapter is being told from Mac's POV, or on the fact that I've been reading HP, which is written in a totally different style than what I usually read. Feedback much appreciated. I just need this chapter to go AWAY.

( let a man have the honor to die with his eyes open so he can see his killer )