Bloody Sunday 3

So, I have this chapter. And there's, like, actual plot advancement. And then I thought, well, you guys are already dealing with CBS's version of events, it's not like you actually want to see my version. So then I deleted it.

...no, I'm just kidding, it's right here.

( he knows that something might go wrong/the ride it ain't smooth that is for sure )

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