Apr. 24th, 2011

bedlamsbard: natasha romanoff from the black widow prelude comic (what are you running from (wibbelkind))
I must have been really close to posting Tuesday at some point, because it's already coded, and I don't go through and add HTML formatting until right before I post. *hands* It's virtually done, I just don't really like the ending very much, and I now have slight problems with the characterization -- which is why I started rewriting it at one point, "Bad Moon Rising" would have been the same story completely rewritten from the beginning, but I stalled out.

Chronologically, it probably takes place slightly before How High the River Rises, since there are mentions of Narnia's money problems. (Wait! I just found an age marker which puts Peter at 20, so around five or six years in.) The most important thing to know is that in this story, Peter fights off ninjas. Naked.

Must Be Tuesday )

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Bad Moon Rising (alternate opening) )

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Not really sure I have any notes to add. I think this was the only fic I wrote where one of Peter's lovers actually does try to kill him, though it's a running joke in the Warsverse that half the people Peter sleeps with try and murder him. He comes out in this story a little more messed up than I really prefer him to be, or at least messed up in different ways. One important thing Tuesday sets up is Coello's treason, which comes up again in other stories. (Or at least I think it does, I can't remember anything off the top of my head where it does appear.)

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