I simply love how you put it in Peter's POV but still managed to enter enough of all the others to form a general image of what they might be thinking and feeling. It's supperb. Caspian acting a bit like a confused child, or a lot maybe. But yeah, he's a bit overwhelmed by everything I think. And it was just oh so ver lovely, I loved this bit, I so did. ^^
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Date: 2008-07-19 11:40 am (UTC)I simply love how you put it in Peter's POV but still managed to enter enough of all the others to form a general image of what they might be thinking and feeling. It's supperb. Caspian acting a bit like a confused child, or a lot maybe. But yeah, he's a bit overwhelmed by everything I think.
And it was just oh so ver lovely, I loved this bit, I so did. ^^