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[bedlamsbard]

Water: Today, the castle attack will be replaced by Miraz's sneak attack on the How, which ends pretty much the same way only the other way around. OH JOY.

Dust: I have this feeling that I'm going to have to cut the last 1500 words I wrote, in order to rewrite them so they make sense. That, or figure out what the hell Peter's plan is. (He has a plan. Really. I SWEAR TO GOD HE HAS A PLAN and is not just making this up as he goes.) The other option is switching POVs, but I really like the opening scene of Dust 9, and I can't do that from anyone else's POV.

And coming up soon (10 or 12, depending on the POV I do 10 in -- Edmund's or Susan's), the part about which I am twitching: the Telmarine-Narnian military. I am debating whether or not it's going to be the full-out knight thing, plate mail and lances and all that. Traditional knights in shining armor, I mean, not the half mail, half plate thing that Peter has going for him.

I mean, not that there's much of the Narnian army left at this point, but I have to know it. *sigh* Also, I need to know for Vespasian, another one of the camps that managed to scavenge one of the army troops that didn't get completely destroyed by the Calormenes, and possibly Tirian.

Comments

[ghostrunner7.livejournal.com]

I do not believe you about Peter having a plan.

HOWEVER. I'm perfectly willing to believe that Peter is like motherfucking Batman and will prevail anyway. Preferably in the most brutal way possible.

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

He has the essence of a plan, but it was kind of screwed because he didn't have complete intel and because he's running into culture shock: this can't possibly be Narnia. He's thinking with the wrong brain; he doesn't need or want his High King brain for this, he needs his twentieth century soldier brain for this.

And he never did like cities anyway.