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Mar. 23rd, 2009 10:25 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
bedlamsbardSusan Pevensie, if you make me cut half this chapter again --
...I just feel like it's too complicated right now, and that I should go back to the first half of the chapter, make a few minor adjustments there, and then start from there again. Why so bloody big, Cair Paravel? Need to find a way to simplify this down, and figure out if this thing that kind of randomly got brought up out of nowhere is going to work or if it should be cut.
(One of the major problems with the fact that I kept pushing the Peter POV back and back again until it's pretty much not going to stay as is, is that a major secondary character got cut, and I have to figure out what to do with that, since he was mentioned in Dust 11 without any context whatsoever. I mean, I can drop it entirely, but --)
...I just feel like it's too complicated right now, and that I should go back to the first half of the chapter, make a few minor adjustments there, and then start from there again. Why so bloody big, Cair Paravel? Need to find a way to simplify this down, and figure out if this thing that kind of randomly got brought up out of nowhere is going to work or if it should be cut.
(One of the major problems with the fact that I kept pushing the Peter POV back and back again until it's pretty much not going to stay as is, is that a major secondary character got cut, and I have to figure out what to do with that, since he was mentioned in Dust 11 without any context whatsoever. I mean, I can drop it entirely, but --)