Oh, man, that was fab. Just thrilling as all hell.
I love the level of detail you put into this: all the little pieces of a well-researched, well-constructed story. And the unresolved issues, like Osumare's brother, and why Peter's still so bad at sailing. And the many distinct characters. It's always nice to see Fiorenza again, as well.
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Date: 2011-06-11 11:18 pm (UTC)I love the level of detail you put into this: all the little pieces of a well-researched, well-constructed story. And the unresolved issues, like Osumare's brother, and why Peter's still so bad at sailing. And the many distinct characters. It's always nice to see Fiorenza again, as well.