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Mar. 26th, 2007 06:45 pm
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1. "The Lucky Ones." Original. The Beauty and the Beast story where Beauty doesn't fall in love with the beast at all.

“Belle,” the Beast says eventually, and Belle says, “Yes?”

“Will you marry me?”

She jerks away so quickly he might as well have slapped her. The music stills abruptly. “No,” she says. “No, I can’t. I won’t,” she corrects.”

2. "Dangerous Heroes." Original. She's a genetically-engineered killing machine on the run from the government. He's a guardian angel trained to kill anything with a pulse. This can't end well.

“I’m always careful,” Vittoria said.

“Only if ‘always’ is another word for ‘never’.”

Vittoria snorted. “I don’t need to be careful,” she said. “I know you have my back.”

There was something gratified in Barney’s face as he let go of her. “Deal with your sister,” he said. “I’ll find the angel.”

3. "Strange Angels." Original. X-series weren't designed to live alone.

“You took him from his unit,” Lucas said flatly. “And you lied to him about it. That’s a great way to start out a trusting relationship, soldier.”

4. "The Years of Ghosts and Shadows." Original. This time, high school really is hell. With a marching band.

He would have been buried with coins on his eyes, Alan is sure of that. His parents would have performed the proper ceremonies, slid gold and silver over his eyes and a sword into his hands for the passage of the dead, and burned him in the night, a fantastic pyre stretching up to the heavens. Cremations for the Auberon, yes, but not in the urn and oven of the mortuary. The White bury their dead, but the Auberon hold to the old ways. The thought makes Alan silent and a little sad.

5. The Spaceforce story. Original. That story where the U.S. gets tired of meddling in international affairs and goes to meddle in intergalactic affairs instead.

"There aren't any aliens in this part of the galaxy!" Berrier protested as the doors banged open.

Young didn't glance up from his console. "Ma'am, we've lost visual, guns, and our shield is disintegrating fast. I'm working on establishing contact."

"Yes!" Berrier said gratefully. "Talk to them! This is all a horrible mistake; it's probably the United States being gunhappy again."

6. Untitled. Star Wars. The story where Obi-Wan is reported dead and Anakin goes on a rampage.

You will know fear,” Kayan said, her voice gathering Dooku’s cultured, aristocratic tones.

Obi-Wan Kenobi’s severed head rolled across the floor, coming to rest at the foot of Master Yoda’s chair. His hands, darkened and burned at the wrist, lay where they’d fallen, one still clutching his deactivated lightsaber.

Anakin Skywalker screamed.

7. Untitled. Star Wars. Skimming a black hole is a bad idea. You never know what you might find on the other side.

Han only blacked out for a minute, breathing a sigh of relief when he opened his eyes and found the Falcon had successfully made the jump to hyperspace – despite what he’d told Luke and Leia, he’d cut it a little too close for comfort. The relief dissipated quickly when he realized that not only was Luke still unconscious, but all the lights in the Falcon’s cockpit were blinking frantically.

“Shit,” he muttered, hands on the console again. Where the hell were they? How far had they gone, their trajectory warped by the black hole’s influence?

8. "The Last Open Door" (working title). Space: Above and Beyond. Nathan West/Cooper Hawkes. Post-"...Tell Our Moms We Done Our Best." You can't go home again, but maybe you can make your own.

Ross glares. Then he says, "Lieutenants, as Colonel McQueen saw fit to remind me once a week on the clock, you've seen nothing but action, and plenty of it. Don't be so quick to get yourselves killed."

"Why not?" Nathan says sharply. "You are."

"West, I'll pretend I didn't hear that," Ross snaps. "Go home. Visit your families. See that girl of yours."

Nathan flinches again. Cooper says stubbornly, "The 58th was my family."

9. Untitled. Space: Above and Beyond. Shane Vansen/Vanessa Damphousse. Mid-season.

"Have you seen the way they look at us?" Damphousse shivers. "It's like we're already dead."

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Date: 2007-03-27 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
...

You kill me dead.

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Date: 2007-03-27 04:54 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
...yay? Anything in particular that led to your state of non-livingness?

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Date: 2007-03-27 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
Um. All of it? Any of it?

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Date: 2007-03-28 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
I stole your little meme thingy. Nice way to keep organized on what I'm working on.

Out of curiosity, how do you tend to write? Do you keep a gazillion word documents open and just write whichever one strikes your fancy? Or do you write one until the plot in your head dries up, and then move on to the next? No real reason to know, I'm just curious :)

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Date: 2007-03-28 03:27 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
I stole it from [livejournal.com profile] stellaluna_ anyway, so it's all fair. Hurrah!

Um...mostly I write by hand, actually, at least write now, so most of my stuff isn't in Word unless I have to write it fast. I usually only have one open, although I've been known to have two. Hand-writing, I write whatever I feel like -- right now, in my writing folder, I have pieces of Spaceforce, the Beauty and the Beast story, Dangerous Heroes, and the West/Hawkes Space: Above and Beyond story I started the other day. I bounce around a lot.

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Date: 2007-03-28 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
I stole it from you, stella, and scarletts_awry, because I am a thief like that.

I can't stand to write by hand... how do you keep up with the story ideas flowing quickly? Do you write short-hand? My hand tends to cramp up if I hand-write too much, so I try to avoid it :)

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Date: 2007-03-28 03:51 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
*shrug* No short hand. I'm a fairly slow handwriter, so I don't tend to cramp unless I'm taking tests. *rolls eyes* Writing is a really, really soothing thing for me to do, so it's...cathartic?

I'll add that I'll also write some stories simultaneously by hand and on the computer; the Beauty and the Beast story is a notable example. Separate scenes, though

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Date: 2007-03-28 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
But how do you keep up with the flow of ideas? Like, have you ever had a scene hit you and it's so perfect and you just have to get it down as quickly as humanly possible before you lose it?

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Date: 2007-03-28 05:09 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
I juggle it around in my head for a while, play with it -- like, I don't write linearly, at least not on paper (on the comp is another matter entirely). I'll write whatever scene I feel like writing, so if I want to write that scene, I'll write it. More often I'll juggle it around for a while, though, just playing with it. (For example, a scene in "The Last Open Door", the SAAB story, where Nathan pulls a knife on his mother -- I know that's going to happen, and that Cooper calms him down, but I'm trying to get a better feel for the characters, that sort of thing.)

If it's a dream scene, then I will scribble it down, as fast as humanly possible, but that's usually in shorthand, not straight out.

I'll take a picture of my writing sometime and put it online, but not today. (Fortunately, I have neat handwriting.)

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Date: 2007-03-28 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
Hm, I guess having good handwriting would be a bonus. That's another reason I avoid hand-writing things!

I was beta'ing a fic for someone today, and they were talking about their writing habits, which is why I'm thinking about this now, so sorry for the randomness :D. It's just so weird to see how other people write!

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Date: 2007-03-29 01:03 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Oh, no, I think talking about writing is absolutely fascinating. Especially my writing. /conceited

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Date: 2007-03-29 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
I think being a writer and being conceited go hand in hand. I mean, what writer doesn't like to hear people praise them?

Okay, if it's not random and boring, then, what do you think of first in writing? Plot, or characters? Which do you form first in your mind?

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Date: 2007-03-29 02:32 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Um...both? Not at the same time, but I think it tends to differ -- actually, let me rephrase that: I think of scenarios first, then characters, then plot. Occasionally I'll reverse characters and scenarios, but plot is nearly always last. (And a plot and a scenario are not the same thing.)

As a familiar example: with the Spaceforce story, my initial impression of it was the scenario. The scenario was that -- okay, I'll be blunt for a moment, it was a political statement -- America had gone to help a weaker nation against a stronger one, went and interfered in what might be construed as another country's civil war, and while this isn't mentioned in "Answer When They're Called to Serving", they went to war under a Republican president and were recalled under a Democratic one who was elected on a campaign of pulling the troops out of Rokasa. The troops there decided to stay because the Confederacy needed them. Let us never talk about the politics part of this ever again, because that quickly went far far away.

That was the scenario. Now, Shelton McAuliffe is a character that's been crawling around in my brain awhile, but she didn't have much of a personality besides "bitchy astrophysicist." Ethan Drew was a character created to fit the scenario -- a fairly open-minded military officer who'd balance out McAuliffe.

As you have probably noticed, there isn't a plot yet.

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Date: 2007-03-27 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Ooh. I love new takes on fairy tales, and I can't wait to see your reworking of Beauty and the Beast. :)

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Date: 2007-03-28 12:34 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
*wince* I've been flocking most of my originals, so chances are the B&tB story will follow suit. If you'd like, though, I can put it up on public for a week once it's done.

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Date: 2007-03-28 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Yes, please. :)

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Date: 2007-03-29 01:05 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Okay, I'll do so as soon as I finish the story. Which will hopefully be soon.

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