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Title: Answer When They're Called to Serving
Fandom: CSI:NY
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "What right do we have to interfere in their war and send our sons and daughters to die light years away from their homes, not even in another part of this planet, but in another part of this galaxy?"
Disclaimer: Not mine. Characters are the property of Anthony Zuiker, Jerry Bruckheimer Television, CBS, and Alliance Atlantis.
Notes: AU. If it seems familiar but definitely isn't CSI:NY, it also doesn't belong to me. For [livejournal.com profile] stellaluna_'s birthday. Have a good one!



Boston, Massachusetts, U.S.A., Earth
Four months ago:


“Good evening. For the past five years now, the United States has been involved in a war not our own, one we are not prepared to fight. We should not have to fight this war – we should not be fighting it! Americans are fighting and dying on the Outer Rim of space, for a people that are not our own – not even human! Tell me, my fellow Americans, why we should be doing this? For knowledge? Already we have gathered enough extraterrestrial technology to leap the field of science generations ahead. In self-defense? The Rokasa Empire poses no threat to Earth. We are speaking of an alien people whose culture and politics we cannot begin to comprehend. What right do we have, as Americans, to make judgments on these people? What right do we have to interfere in their war and send our sons and daughters to die light years away from their homes, not even in another part of this planet, but in another part of this galaxy? We have no right. The Rokasa War has no bearing on the United States of America and our troops should be recalled back to Earth immediately, before more die for nothing. Thank you. I give the floor to my opponent, the President of the United States…”

Kaess-Olin System, Rokasa Confederacy
Today:

“Yeehaw!”
Danny shouted, the sound echoing through the narrow confines of his starfighter. He banked sharply to the left, sliding between two Imperial vulture ships, and fired from the belly of his starfighter, dropping straight down as the vulture exploded. When its companion followed suit a heartbeat later, Danny let out a howl of success, turning his fighter upright again so he could see Flack giving him a thumbs up from behind the transparisteel of his cockpit.

His headset crackled. “We’ve got vultures incoming, Messer,” Flack said gleefully, angling his starfighter away. Danny followed, slightly to the left, hands tightening on the controls as Flack let out a whoop of excitement and flew straight at the vulture trio, nearly nose to nose with the leader. Danny dropped down beneath him, twisting his fighter upside down and flying belly to belly with the others, who broke sideways, trying to flank him. Fire exploded briefly above him as Flack fired and twisted sideways and down, dodging the set of shots the vulture had managed to get off before Flack’s connected. Danny shot upward, dodging the vulture shots, and rolled his ship, coming straight down at the nearest vulture. He pulled up at the last moment, rolling again as he sent off a spray of shots that scorched the paint on the vulture that didn’t do any permanent damage.

Flack swore in his ear. “What?” Danny said, dodging the vulture’s shots in a series of wild aerobatics that had long ago lost their ability to make him sick to his stomach. “What? Are you hit?”

“My shields are down,” Flack said bitterly, and swore again. “Stop playing around, Messer, and get over here and cover my ass. This ends now, before one of us goes down.”

“Man,” Danny said, “you get all pissy whenever you get hit. Hold on.” He rolled once more and fired while still in the middle of it, cracking the transparisteel on the vulture’s cockpit. The Imperial inside – humanoid, from the looks of it – went white, attention all on keeping his ship together, and Danny took advantage of the situation to fire his forward guns full power, diving aside to drop down behind Flack, who was on the offensive now, harrying the remaining vulture fighter, firing off little blasts of lasers that did little more than scorch across the vulture’s hull, dodging the return blasts.

“Just take him out already,” Danny said, trying to get a fix on the vulture, which was quicker and more slippery than the others.

“My forward guns are out,” Flack snapped. “And without a rear shield, I’m really not up for exposing my belly for a low shot. You take the fucker out.”

“God, you’re annoying,” Danny said, and took the shot. He and Flack broke right and left, separated from the rest of the firefight now, watching it wind down as Confederate and Imperial starfighters danced and died in space.

His headset crackled. “Good work, boys, now come on home,” the New York’s communications officer said. “We’ve got some bad news from Earth.”

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Adam was busy transmitting the databurst from Washington forward to all the other Spaceforce starcruisers in the Empire. “Affirmative from Pennsylvania,” he announced. “Affirmative from Nevada. Affirmative from Washington, but they’re pissed. Affirmative from Kansas.”

“What about Florida and California?” Mac demanded.

“No affirmative.”

California’s still grounded on Bruxtupi,” Stella reminded Mac, eyes on the wall-wide Rokasan map of the galaxy. Blinking green dots, labeled with their names, showed the last known location of every Spaceforce ship in the known galaxy. “General, they’re not going to be able to get through that Imperial blockade in time to make the wormhole.”

“I know. NASA didn’t design blockade runners.” He pressed his lips tightly together. “The data should get through, though. What about the Florida?”

Adam shook his head. “No affirmative.” His hands hesitated over the keyboard. “Affirmative from California. Lieutenant Colonel Eppes will contact you later.”

“Where was Florida’s last known location?”

Stella squinted at the map. “The Dessulu System. General, there are three thousand troops on that ship, as well as hundred Spaceforce crewmen.”

“I know. Try and make contact.”

Adam pulled the mic on his headset against his mouth. “Florida, this is USSS New York. Please respond. Repeat, Florida, this is the United States Starship New York, please respond.” He paused. “No contact.”

“General Taylor?” Adam’s second said, leaning over from his own station. “We’re getting a distress beacon on the emergency channel.”

“Tune it in,” Mac ordered, and Adam’s fingers flew over the keyboard.

“It’s the Florida’s code. Attempting to establish contact on the emergency channel – USSS Florida, this is the USSS New York. Please respond. Repeat: Florida, this is the United States Starship New York, please respond immediately.” Another pause. “No contact. I’m not getting any other signal from the Florida.”

Mac turned to Stella. “Who’s closest?”

She glanced at the map again. “We are.”

He turned back to Adam. “Get Colonel Booth on the horn. We’re going after the Florida, and I want someone I trust to be in charge here.”

-
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“This sucks,” Flack said bitterly, sprawled out in the cruiser’s commons area. He was cleaning his sidearm slowly and methodically, materials strewn out around him and covering almost as much couch space as he was. “This sucks a lot. Has the Pentagon even been looking at the reports Taylor’s been sending back? Bruxtupi’s under fucking siege; there’s no way in hell California’s going to make it back here in a week. NASA didn’t design fucking blockade runners.”

“There are three thousand American troops on Bruxtupi,” Danny said inanely, trying to stuff enough painkillers in his mouth to kill the headache the orders from Washington had brought on.

Flack glared at him over the barrel of his pistol. “Yeah, and they’re sitting around doing jack shit. Taylor shoulda sent them with the Florida over to Dessulu. Christ, the Confederates are gonna be pissed.”

“I’m pissed,” Danny said, giving up on the painkillers and putting his head between his knees instead, fingers laced over the back of his skull.

“You’re pissed, I’m the one that nearly totaled my fighter and nearly died.” His hands tightened on the pistol as the ship lurched suddenly.

Danny swore. “Why the hell are we going into lightspace? All we have to do is fly down and go through the atmosphere and we’re on Kaes-Olin. Why the hell are we – oh, God.” He put his head back down between his knees, this time for nausea instead of headache. Lightspace jumps, God damn it, this was all he needed on top of a headache and a pair of bad orders.

Not to mention Flack not being bothered by them. He tucked his sidearm back in its holster and stood up, announcing, “I’m going up to the bridge to see what the hell kind of fool plan Taylor’s got now. God help us all if involves personally breaking the Bruxtupi blockade to get the California back; we do not have that much firepower unless Hawkes can come up with something really cool.”

“Please stop talking now,” Danny said, holding his head. The headache had come back, and it had brought friends to double-date with the nausea. Give him an hour or so and he’d be good, but until then – hell of a thing for a pilot, although the starfighters weren’t equipped with lightspace drives. “Better yet, please leave now.”

“So demanding,” Flack said, rolling his eyes, and rested a surprisingly gentle hand on his shoulder before he left, leaving his gear strewn out where he’d been sitting. Danny kept his head on his knees, breathing through his mouth, trying to calm the jump-sickness.

-
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“We’re close,” Mac said, frowning at the coordinates on the screen. “Take us out of lightspace now; we’ll go the rest in realspace.”

“Pulling out of lightspace –” Stella said, hands on the controls, and forced herself to keep her eyes open as her stomach turned over and they pulled out of lightspace and into realspace.

“Oh God,” Lindsay said, and Stella heard her run out of the bridge to the head, feet pattering on the chromium floor. Lightspace-realspace jumps took most Earth-humans like that; Spaceforce scientists had decided that the Rokasa humanoids were so used to it after millennia with the technology that any reactions were minimal, if they existed at all. The biologists, already in ecstasy over the millions of new species, had had a field day with that.

Stella blinked the blur of stars from her eyes. They’d come out near the edge of the Dessulu System, the Sa Sai asteroid belt hanging in the distance with the sleek form of the Florida before it. The starcruiser wasn’t moving.

Mac clasped his hands behind his back, face stern. “Establish contact,” he ordered, and Adam leaned over the communications screen, frowning over the switchboard.

Florida, this is USSS New York. Please respond. Repeat, Florida, this is the United States Starship New York, please respond.” He flicked switches up and down the board. “I’m still not getting a signal aside from the distress beacon. Switching to a manual override of the Florida’s systems.” He pushed the switchboard aside and pulled the keyboard forward.

A flicker of movement at the corner of Stella’s vision. Flack had come up from below decks, already dressed in a spacer’s jumpsuit with his holster strapped to his thigh and his helmet tucked under his arm. Stella motioned him over when Mac didn’t acknowledge him.

“How long?” he asked, as casually informal around her as all of them were by now except Mac. Five years on the front lines of what liberals back on Earth were now scathingly calling the Galactic War on Terror had done wonders with the concept of military formality.

Stella nodded toward Adam. “We weren’t able to establish contact. Adam’s hacking the Florida’s system right now.”

Flack touched his forehead briefly in a half-salute. “Danny and I’ll head down to the fighter bay, then. Let us know when you want us to head out.”

“Will do,” Stella said, as Adam exclaimed, “Got it! We’re in.”

“Hold a minute, Lieutenant,” Mac ordered. “Let’s see what you and Lieutenant Messer and heading into.”

Flack stopped obediently, turning to the wallwide screen that usually showed a Rokasan galactic map and was now projecting the Florida’s security footage.

“No movement,” Stella said, narrow-eyed. “And that’s a body.”

Mac turned to Flack. “Prepare to head out, Lieutenant.”

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“Imperial?” Stella said grimly, averting her eyes from the stacked pyramid of severed human heads. The Florida’s crew, as well as the Marines they’d been carrying. Several thousand heads in all; they’d found the bodies themselves piled in the mess hall. There were only two that for some reason hadn’t been put with the others. One was the one they’d seen on the Florida’s camera, stuffed into a ventilation shaft with his head blown apart; the other was the ship’s medical officer, neatly dismembered and reassembled on her own operating table. Stella had very nearly been sick when she’d seen that; she’d known Woods, originally been stationed with her on the Rhode Island before they’d both been reassigned to the Rokasa mission.

“No,” Mac said, just as grim. “This isn’t their style. The Imperials are more…civilized.”

Stella swore. “Who the hell else, then? The Imps are the only ones in this part of the galaxy that hate us this much.”

“The Imperials don’t hate us,” Mac corrected, not once taking his off the grisly spectacle in the commons. “They hate the Confederacy fro trying to tear the Union apart – yes, I’m aware of the irony, Major. They resent the U.S. for interfering in their business, but they don’t hate us. They’re not capable of something like this.”

“Maybe not the Imperial Army,” Stella said stubbornly, “but what about their subjects? Some of the Imperial worlds are worse than the Aztecs and the Nazis put together.”

Mac pressed his lips tightly together. “If we can, we should sent the bodies back to Earth, especially with a wormhole opening so soon. Get Adam up here to set the climate controls to something preservative. Put Flack and Messer onboard as pilots, along with a battalion of Marines – Flack commanding. We’ll rendezvous with them back on Kaess-Olin.”

“No retaliation?”

“No time,” Mac said evenly. “We’re back on Earth in five days.”

“Washington’ll be pissed –”

“Washington will pull us back tomorrow if they hear about this,” he said sharply. “We have less than five days to get the California off Bruxtupi. All of us leave or none of us leave.” He turned abruptly on his heel. “Get the people I asked for down here now.”

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“I bet this ship’s haunted,” Adam said, keeping one hand on his gun as they paced down the hallway. He glanced uneasily at the sealed doors of the commons and the mess.

“Afraid of ghosts?” Danny said.

It was Flack who answered. “Over two and a half thousand people died on this ship; I’m not too happy here myself. Really hoping for a promotion out of this gig, though.”

“All this shit we’ve been through? I think we’re due a couple.”

“Yes, but what about me?” Adam said piteously. “I don’t care about getting promoted; I just don’t want to die.”

“We checked the ship over pretty thoroughly,” Flack said. “There’s nothing here.” He glanced briefly over his shoulder, a fine shiver running up his spine.

“Except for two thousand, seven hundred and thirty-one bodies. Dead bodies.” He looked down. “Where are the bloodstains? I thought there’d be bloodstains.”

Danny’s gaze flickered downward to the dull chromium floor. He looked back up to find Flack looking at him, one eyebrow raised. “Good point,” he said.

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The Confederacy was understanding. Unhappy, but understanding, and the Kaessii let Mac use the Grand Arena to speak to the troops. Stella stood off to one side, Danny and Flack to the other. They’d become war heroes in the past five years, easily identifiable in their deep blue Spaceforce uniforms, legs spread slightly and hands clasped behind their backs. Even here, in the presence of fifteen thousand American troops they were armed, holsters strapped to each hip, low and hanging over their thighs.

“You’ve all heard the news by now,” Mac said, voice carrying easily. “Washington, and President Copland, have issued general recall for all American troops on the Outer Rim. NASA is opening a wormhole home the day after tomorrow and we all have orders to go home. Unfortunately, almost six thousand of us won’t be able to. The USSS California is still grounded on the planet Bruxtupi, which is under siege by Imperial troops. They haven’t been able to break the blockade from the inside, and neither have we from the outside. There are three thousand Americans that are going to be stranded on that planet.

“You’ll note that none of the officers, crew, or troops on board the USSS Florida are present. Two days ago we received a distress signal from the Florida. When my crew and I arrived in the Dessulu System, we boarded the Florida, and found that all on board had been killed, slaughtered like animals. Almost three thousand people: Spaceforce, Marines, and civilian scientists. We have orders not to investigate farther or retaliate.

“Never before has the United States of America deliberately forbidden an investigation into the deaths of thousands of its citizens. Never before has it deliberately forbidden a retaliatory act on the perpetrator.

“Leaving Rokasa now means abandoning the California and her people. It means letting the Florida go unavenged. It means walking away from everything we’ve spent the past five years fighting for, killing for, dying for, and I’m not willing to do that. Not while I still have soldiers here. If leaving Rokasa means abandoning the California, then I will not leave. If leaving Rokasa means letting the Florida be forgotten, then I will not leave. If leaving Rokasa means leaving the Confederacy to fight a war that they cannot win alone, then I will not leave.

“The day after tomorrow, the Florida will go through a wormhole back to Earth, where it will be poured over unceasingly and ultimately forgotten. The California will not return. The New York will not return. All of you have your orders. All of you are human. If you choose to follow your orders, then I will turn a blind eye. If you fear court-martial, then return to Earth by all means. If you remember what it means to be truly American, then remain here. Remain fighting.”

The cheers shook the Grand Arena.

They’d stay, then.

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Date: 2007-01-20 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
Holy shit.

I am utterly speechless. This is just... so frakking amazing. Genius. It's such a well done AU, and it's the little details that work so perfectly, the ships and the attitudes (and the fact that Eppes is in charge of the California!). And Mac's speech at the end is so him, because I think that's really the only time he would ever disobey orders.

Gah. Best thing to wake up to on a Saturday. Seriously wow.

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:24 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
*beams* Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this, so I'm glad it turned out well. I could not resist the names of the starcruisers and the officers on board (Eppes and the California are not the only ones, although I think the Florida and the Washington are the only other ones named).

*nods* Mac will do almost anything for his people, and since he is the officer in charge of the entire Rokasa mission (which I, um, don't think I ever stated), that means his people include something around 15,000 American troops: Spaceforce, Marines, and civilians. He won't leave the California's people behind anymore than he'd leave Stella or Danny or Flack. Even if the Florida massacre hadn't happened, he might have stayed behind anyway.

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
and since he is the officer in charge of the entire Rokasa mission (which I, um, don't think I ever stated)

I suspected, but wasn't sure, and knowing that for certain really explains a lot more about his character, especially at the end. Mac would never leave a man behind, so yeah, I definitely can see why he'd refuse to let the California be left behind, though I suspect he wouldn't do so even if he wasn't in charge!

Hm, so, don't suppose we'll get a sequel for this? Like, the after-effects of Mac's decision to stay and fight? :)

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:46 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Hmm, I wonder if I should make that explicit? It's implied in several scenes, but...nah, I don't have the energy.

That's an interesting question, if he'd leave the California behind if he wasn't in charge. I want to say he wouldn't, but it's hard to be sure -- I mean, Flack? Definitely wouldn't leave them behind. I suspect he was plotting how to steal a starfighter and fly to Bruxtupi the entire way back with the Florida when he wasn't looking over his shoulder for ghosts. But Mac? Different creature altogether.

Probably not. Maybe, but I'm looking at no right now because I have no idea what to write beyond this.

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
Mac's got a thing about doing what he believes is right, even if that opinion is different from others... I mean, look at earlier this season, when Peyton disagreed with him. He knew he was right, and he wasn't gonna listen to anyone tell him otherwise. I'd like to think that he wouldn't let 3000 people die just because he had orders. If he had a way to do it, I can see him being like "Yeah, I'm gonna go through the wormhole last, you all go on ahead" and then sneaking off to help the California after everyone else is gone, if it came down to that.

Well, if you're inspired, I'm not gonna complain ;).

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Date: 2007-01-21 02:06 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Mmm. I'm fairly certain you're right there; he probably would have told Stella at least, and then been confronted with the entire crew of the New York going, "Uh, hell no, General Taylor. What do you think we are? Do you think you're subtle or something? Because you're totally not." The Washington probably would have also stayed behind.

Well, it's not like the California's people would have died, just been abandoned on the other side of the galaxy. I mean, they're the ones that proved Earth-humans are interfertile at least with the Bruxtupi-humanoids.

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Date: 2007-01-21 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
Who's the Captain/General of the Washington? I don't remember seeing who it was.

Maybe not died, then... though being abandoned would probably still equal death in the long run, wouldn't it? Without supplies and fresh troops from Earth, the California would be alone fighting with a race that is unable to win without Earth's help.

Mac disobeying orders = kinda hot.

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:20 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Colonel Seeley Booth, a.k.a. Special Agent Booth from ABC's Bones. The Washington is carrying the bulk of Spaceforce's civilian scientists (the rest are spread out between ships). Booth is the officer Mac told Adam to contact just before the New York went after the Florida.

Not necessarily. It's theoretical how much the U.S. is actually helping the Confederacy: they're allies, yes, but with only 20,000 troops spread out between seven starcruisers, unaccustomed to space-fighting, poorly equipped and without a lot of funding, based on the other side of the galaxy...they're not all that helpful, actually. Earth tech is nowhere near Rokasa level. The California's people could survive, probably, although I'd love to see the psychological trauma that would probably result from being alone in an alien universe, branded as allies to a traitor segment, abandoned by your own people...

Er.

The rest of the crew being loyal to Mac = hot.

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
Ah, my sister adores "Bones", though I've only seen a few episodes.

although I'd love to see the psychological trauma that would probably result from being alone in an alien universe, branded as allies to a traitor segment, abandoned by your own people...

That would definitely be interesting, seeing how they adapt (or don't, I suppose) to being cut off from Earth.

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:33 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
I don't watch it regularly, but I have caught enough episodes to be pleasantly surprised: the characters are fun, including a lead who's probably one of my favorite female characters ever -- and I usually can't stand female characters -- as well as a great dynamic between the male and female leads.

That would definitely be interesting, seeing how they adapt (or don't, I suppose) to being cut off from Earth.

Which, of course, is the problem that everyone else now faces, only now there are more of them and they chose to cut themselves off from Earth. At least they have allies, and a purpose for staying behind.

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
At least they have allies, and a purpose for staying behind.

The purpose especially I can see as being the thing that keeps them sane and alive... especially if those like the New York and the Washington stay behind, having chosen to do so. Having that purpose to drive them would distract them from the realization that they're probably never going to see home again.

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:51 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
But what happens once the siege is broken and the California is rescued? All they have then is the war, which they can't win...oh yeah, they also have revenge. Forgot about that one.

Oh yeah, I had a whole second plot running. Wow, I'm smart, I forgot about it. Whoever massacred the Florida's crew wasn't Imperial; wasn't even from that portion of the galaxy at all. Is greater than either the Empire or the Confederacy, let alone little tiny backwater Earth. There's also that to worry about.

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] limmenel.livejournal.com
If the people on the New York are anything like the characters from CSI: NY, I can imagine they would be intent on hunting down the people who murdered the 2500+ crew of the Florida. Even if they're not forensic scientists anymore, there's always the revenge on their deaths.

Is greater than either the Empire or the Confederacy, let alone little tiny backwater Earth.

That's a plot I'd definitely like to see explored at some point. Their realizing that the war they're in, that they've fought and died for, is nothing compared to this other foe, this great thing that's hunted down and killed so many humans.

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Date: 2007-01-20 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/stellaluna_/
*glee*

You are insane in all the most wonderful ways.

I love Danny and Flack almost getting killed in their starfighters, and I love this very military Mac. Their discovery of what's happened to the Florida is just chilling, as is the discussion of ghosts and bloodstains. And, as always, you're true to the characters while re-envisioning them in this new setting.

Thank you so much for this!

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:37 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Hurrah, insanity!

I'm really glad you like it! It was fun to write -- one of the few CSI:NY stories I've written recently that really flowed, rather than being forced, with a few exceptions. And, of course, there had to be murder: there's always murder in the CSI:NY 'verse, no matter which one it is.

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Date: 2007-01-20 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moska-v.livejournal.com
I echo...holy shit!

Is it possible for Stellaluna to have another birthday (no age increase ;) ) to see additions to this story?

Wow.

I'm totally in love with this military Mac :) And of *course* Stel is his 2IC! Yeah!

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:48 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
*blush* Thank you! I'm almost certain this is a one-shot, but I never say never.

Military Mac is fun to write. So is military Stella. *grin*

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Date: 2007-01-21 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moska-v.livejournal.com
Feel free to allow the two of them to break the rules of fraterization with each other anytime... could be an interesting relationship considering the power between them.

It was just a very enjoyable story so thank you for your efforts :)

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Date: 2007-01-21 02:01 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
I have the feeling that being totally cut off from Earth is going to lead to a lot of mental unstability on the part of the Spaceforce troops in Rokasa, Mac and Stella among them. Especially considering the sort of stuff they're up against. Comfort where you can find it, yeah?

Thank you for reading.

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Date: 2007-01-21 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moska-v.livejournal.com
Most assuredly. And maybe that will spawn a couple of ideas for you in the future :) Star Wars is cool and all, but it's truly fun to place these characters in the world you've created :)

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Date: 2007-01-21 02:34 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
*pause* The original plan was for this to be a Star Wars crossover. It did not work out.

And there's just the one Star Wars fic. Granted, it's the one kicking my ass, but still.

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Date: 2007-01-21 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moska-v.livejournal.com
Ah, didn't quite realize that. My SW fascination was way back at the beginning in the early 80s :) I haven't even seen all of the new ones yet. JarJar scarred me

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Date: 2007-01-21 03:06 am (UTC)
ext_2135: narnia: home sweet home (soraki) (Default)
From: [identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com
Well, there were plans to be more than one Star Wars fics, but I really don't have the energy to do the kind of intensive writing I'm doing on the one I am writing for more than one, although I have various bits and pieces written up for several.

Jar-Jar only has very brief appearances in Attack of the Clones and Revenge of the Sith! My opinion of the prequels is that it's mostly love or hate: they have their flaws, but if you can ignore them, then there are really good parts, like Obi-Wan. And more Obi-Wan. And the Obi-Wan/Anakin that is only the most obvious thing in the galaxy.

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Date: 2007-01-21 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neviditelny.livejournal.com
Total awesomeness!!!!

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Date: 2007-01-22 12:45 am (UTC)

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