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Susan Pevensie, if you make me cut half this chapter again --

...I just feel like it's too complicated right now, and that I should go back to the first half of the chapter, make a few minor adjustments there, and then start from there again. Why so bloody big, Cair Paravel? Need to find a way to simplify this down, and figure out if this thing that kind of randomly got brought up out of nowhere is going to work or if it should be cut.

(One of the major problems with the fact that I kept pushing the Peter POV back and back again until it's pretty much not going to stay as is, is that a major secondary character got cut, and I have to figure out what to do with that, since he was mentioned in Dust 11 without any context whatsoever. I mean, I can drop it entirely, but --)

and THEN I have to rip out three rows because otherwise I'm going to run out of yarn

Note to self: remember to type up COMPLETED STORY, find a title, and post.

The really sad thing is that the story's been completed since, oh...Wednesday? Thereabouts.

Peter/Susan, Lucy POV, Golden Age, post-Truth No. 2, untitled, DONE, yet handwritten and therefore unposted. Must get around to that.

And don't even get me started on Dust 12; all I know at this point is that I am not, repeat not, cutting the whole 7K. God damn it, Susan, what the fuck. And you too, Peter, while we're at it.

Narnia (movieverse) fic: "Landslide" (Peter/Susan)

Title: Landslide
Author: bedlamsbard
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia movieverse
Rating: PG-13
Summary: You think it’s new, majesty, but it’s not. You think they don’t know what they’re doing, but they do. You think they haven’t thought about it, but they have. Lucy, after Truth No. 2. Peter/Susan.
Warnings: Incest.
Disclaimer: The Chronicles of Narnia and its characters, settings, situations, etc., belong to C.S. Lewis. Certain characters, settings, situations, etc., belong to Walden Media. Title from the Dixie Chicks' "Landslide".

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