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Oh my god. I think I may actually be incapable of making these two make out.

In normal fic, don't the passionate declarations of love usually follow the making out, not precede or, in fact, possibly supersede it? (Also, this passionate declaration of love is possibly the most awkward scene I have ever written: I am embarrassed for everyone involved, and that's not even counting the probable voyeurism from the evil overlord with dire intentions towards one of the pair and homicial intentions towards the other.)

*despairs*