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Mar. 14th, 2012 01:02 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
bedlamsbardOh my god. I think I may actually be incapable of making these two make out.
In normal fic, don't the passionate declarations of love usually follow the making out, not precede or, in fact, possibly supersede it? (Also, this passionate declaration of love is possibly the most awkward scene I have ever written: I am embarrassed for everyone involved, and that's not even counting the probable voyeurism from the evil overlord with dire intentions towards one of the pair and homicial intentions towards the other.)
*despairs*
In normal fic, don't the passionate declarations of love usually follow the making out, not precede or, in fact, possibly supersede it? (Also, this passionate declaration of love is possibly the most awkward scene I have ever written: I am embarrassed for everyone involved, and that's not even counting the probable voyeurism from the evil overlord with dire intentions towards one of the pair and homicial intentions towards the other.)
*despairs*
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Date: 2012-03-14 07:21 am (UTC)I think it's because it's Anakin, and Obi-Wan really really wants to be in control of this all and it's probably taking place in Dooku's Evil Fortress of Doom, and is probably NOT an appropriate place to have making outs.
Or dramatic declarations of passionate feelings, no matter what Anakin says.
*patpat*
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Date: 2012-03-15 05:18 am (UTC)