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bedlamsbardYou know, I haven't done my reading for Gov, or my study guide for Gov, or installed Excel+PowerPoint+unneeded stuff on my laptop, or done my six graphs for Chem, but I did type up another two or three scenes of my novel. And look at some really pretty SGA art. And watch Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles.
Hey, did I mention I wrote the same scene, like, three different times from two different POVs? It'd actually make a pretty good example of character bias/the importance of POV if I could show it to Creative Writing Club. Which I can't. Because it's a sex scene. Yes. Well. One of the versions is explicit, one is implied/blurred/no details, and one is fade to black. Two are from Ethan's POV, one is from Cam's. Two take place in Cam's rooms, one takes place in Ethan's; in all three Cam is the instigator. I'm leaning towards the third version I wrote as the "canon" version, but I have to change a few things. Ethan's emotional trauma of the moment; it has to be more combat-burnout-oriented than it is currently.
Also, now I have to go to bed so I can function tomorrow morning.
Hey, did I mention I wrote the same scene, like, three different times from two different POVs? It'd actually make a pretty good example of character bias/the importance of POV if I could show it to Creative Writing Club. Which I can't. Because it's a sex scene. Yes. Well. One of the versions is explicit, one is implied/blurred/no details, and one is fade to black. Two are from Ethan's POV, one is from Cam's. Two take place in Cam's rooms, one takes place in Ethan's; in all three Cam is the instigator. I'm leaning towards the third version I wrote as the "canon" version, but I have to change a few things. Ethan's emotional trauma of the moment; it has to be more combat-burnout-oriented than it is currently.
Also, now I have to go to bed so I can function tomorrow morning.