*eyeball*

[bedlamsbard]

I do not have high hopes for Caspian's POV ("In a Dark Wood") being one of the shorter ones. The boy's too confused; he has to ruminate on everything.

On the other hand, he is ruminating on Narnian/Telmarine legends, so at least it's interesting.

On the other other hand, he thinks in faux-high fantasy style, so there goes that.

(Hey, on the fourth hand -- foot? -- I have no idea how he's going to refer to Peter and Co., since he's still not convinced that Peter's actually, (a), one of the four children who broke the Long winter, (b), the King of Summer from Narnian fairytales, (c), the High King of Narnia from Telmarine history, or (d), some combination of the above. Or (e), an imposter. That boy is suspicious.)

Comments

[swift-tales.livejournal.com]

Poor Caspian, he does sound mightily confused and in over his head (and suspicious). But then again, I think Caspian has the right to be suspicious about everything you know. I mean, everything he knew has changed and take into consideration that he's been decieved (at least to a certain degree) by practically everyone he's ever known, so yeah... suspicious seems right.

And Hoorah! For the Narnian/Telmarine legends, I'm really looking forward to that ^^

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

I don't blame him; he's just so damn wordy.

[franceica.livejournal.com]

I can't possibly describe how eager I am to see the new fic. Yeah, really eager. Although your Lucy's always a bit scary to me, but it is still so fascinating to read. And I can't tell you enough how much I love Caspian being mightily confused, that's absolutely gold (I am actually trying to persuade you to do the "Caspian in golden age" here, really)!

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

Caspian in the Golden Age is going to be the next story I write, probably, if only because it's so self-indulgent.