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[bedlamsbard]

I am in edits in "In Constellated Wars." (Which I held off doing most of the day after reading part one and going, "Fuck, I'm going to have rewrite Peter's entire story, aren't I?" because it contradicts later stuff, and also, he thinks more than that. And by holding off, I mean I played approximately ten million games of solitaire and watched three-quarters of LWW.) Anyway, Peter's story is going to have to be massively rewritten, Susan's is in what is hopefully its final form, and I'm just starting on Edmund's. Also, other fic in progress is the story where Narnia gets its navy and its first humans other than the Pevensies. Also, Peter gets laid.

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[swift-tales.livejournal.com]

Does this mean that Peter's part is in danger of becoming as wordy as Caspian's? I mean, a massive re-write takes time, but even more so if you know, you're adding tons and tons of stuff. I hope these series don't break your brain :p You have a lovely brain.

The other stories gets interesting, I mean, it's a bit funky how there seem to be humans in Narnia after the Pevensies appear, but not before, even though none of those humans are decendents of the Pevensie kids.

And Hoozah! Peter gets laid :D

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

Nah, Peter isn't as talkative as Caspian, I just have to flesh it out a lot, probably the same way I do rewrites on my papers. Paragraph by paragraph, each one in separate Word documents -- maybe page by page, since this is a story rather than a research paper.

Immigrants. Lots and lots of immigrants. And some refugees. (This particular lot...well, we'll see.)

[swift-tales.livejournal.com]

That's an interesting way of re-writing a story, I'll have to remember that one. :p

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

Well, I have to see if it works with a story rather than a research paper, but it works great for second/final drafts. *grin*