The story I am writing is not the story I meant to write. I am distracted from the glory of the flowering of Narnia by Peter and Edmund bickering with each other. I mean, amusing as this is
not really the tone I want for the story. (I put the following exchange up because I'm pretty sure it's getting cut.) Beautiful doomed glory of the Golden Age here, not Peter and Edmund bitching about who's been licking the poison darts. (And whoever gets that fic/fandom reference gets a puppy. Or, you know, fic. I don't think it's that obscure, but what do I know?)
On the other hand, I now know that once, Edmund accidentally got thrown back in time to Narnia during the White Witch's reign, in the depth of the Long Winter. Not a fun trip.
("I only blame you every other time Narnia wakes me up in the middle of the night screaming that you’ve fallen down a well.”
“I have never – oh, that does not count.”
“It was a hole in the ground with water at the bottom, and you were down it. Narnia thought you were dying.”
“It was not a well, I was not dying, Narnia knows when I’m dying, unlike some people here who I won’t name –”
“Oh, I beg to differ, Narnia cannot tell when you’re actually dying and when you’re just being attacked by giant poisonous spiders. I know. She wakes me up for both instances.”)
not really the tone I want for the story. (I put the following exchange up because I'm pretty sure it's getting cut.) Beautiful doomed glory of the Golden Age here, not Peter and Edmund bitching about who's been licking the poison darts. (And whoever gets that fic/fandom reference gets a puppy. Or, you know, fic. I don't think it's that obscure, but what do I know?)
On the other hand, I now know that once, Edmund accidentally got thrown back in time to Narnia during the White Witch's reign, in the depth of the Long Winter. Not a fun trip.
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Date: 2008-08-07 04:19 am (UTC)I foresee screaming fights where Peta punches him in the face and storms off to the stables, the practice yards, or the armory, and thence on out into the wilds of Narnia, where she, I don't know, hunts down renegade Telmarines or bandits or something for a month, at which point Caspian is frantic and trying to send out search parties.
Now, the other question is, is Peta the only one who stays behind, or do the other three Pevensies stay too? And what happens in Voyage?
NOT WRITING THIS 'VERSE. (Except maybe the sex. For some reason, I really want to write the sex.)
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Date: 2008-08-07 04:41 am (UTC)Narnia would possess the person taking the "Bride" position, the non-earthbound ruler; in this case, Caspian. Peta is *still* the "High Queen". Caspian would end up being her support...and would always know where she was, damn it! Watch her fume.
Like I said, the only question would be is would adding Caspian to the bond break Edmund's tie to Peta? I don't think so, because the Peta's tie to Narnia isn't breakable, so why would his to her be?...and at least it would give Peta somebody to help keep the concerned Caspian kind of under control and/or advised in how to deal with her better as he adjusts to 1)being bound, 2)being married and in love, 3)being Prince Consort and accepting that he is NOT one of the four rulers of the country, 4)forming relationships with his highly individual in-laws and 4)learning to be more Narnian.
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Date: 2008-08-07 07:51 am (UTC)Somehow I think Caspian is going to be very alarmed about several things. The fact that he's not going to be king -- and oh, won't that be a shocker -- the fact that Peta's tied to the land. The fact that Peta can kick his ass.
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Date: 2008-08-07 10:34 pm (UTC)Tied to the land, had sex with her brother, can kick his ass...none of these add up to "yay, married life!"
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Date: 2008-08-07 10:44 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-08-07 10:52 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-08-07 11:32 pm (UTC)