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[bedlamsbard]

THE LITTLE CHAPTER THAT WOULD NOT BE WRITTEN IS DONE. Now I have to go through and cut the crazy, crazy amounts of exposition.

Also, apparently there is a lot of Peter/Tirian subtext, and Tirian may or may not have a crush on the High King. BUT WHO WOULDN'T?

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[katakokk.livejournal.com]

HUZZAH! IT IS FINISHED.

Oh dear. Peter/Tirian subtext. Oh dear.

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

According to Lass! who has comments that read "aww tirian’s crush on peter! <33."

[westingturtle.livejournal.com]

I thought Tirian had a thing for Lucy (bare ankles and scandal!) or is he just going to work his way through the whole Pevensie clan a la Caspian?

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

Oh, you know me, I just like putting subtext in wherever I can.

[snacky]

But in the extended remix, all the exposition will be left in, right? ;)

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

ahahahaha if it doesn't make it in later in the story, I'll post it separately in a deleted scenes post. I've already cut over a thousand words, and at least the bit about the Calormene prince who's ruling Narnia will make it in later.

[burntcopper.livejournal.com]

crush? naaaaaaah.

More like 'lust but oh dear god sex ONLY, he's a psycho'

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

yeah, I think Tirian may be fangirling our Peter. I'm just saying here.

[burntcopper.livejournal.com]

I get the feeling that only a Telmarine or Narnian could fangirl Peter due to the weight of legend blinding them...

[bedlamsbard.livejournal.com]

Maybe an Archenlander, but even then...everyone else pretty much focuses on CRAZY KILLER ARE YOU PEOPLE INSANE HELP HELP.